Kyle Rayner is now on the list of characters Adam Beechen shouldn't write. I mean, maybe it was the artist but that first sequence was a bit too sleazy for me. Since when does Kyle come on to his old girlfriends, anyway? There should be a lot more awkwardness there.
The second sequence was better when Simone wrote it in Atom #15. The layout and the art in Atom was much better too.
Nice cover, at least.